Monday, April 25, 2011

Luis Likes the Weather Today

    Most people do not like the weather today, which is overcast and a little bit cold.  For example, many people do not go out of their homes and are sad when the weather is overcast.  Also, many fun activities depend on sunny weather, like playing soccer, playing tennis, going swimming, and going surfing.   However, in spite of the fact that people cannot have fun in this kind of weather, Luis is different and likes the weather when it is cold and overcast.

    The first reason why Luis likes cold and overcast weather is that he does not like hot weather.  For example, when it is hot he gets really sweaty and his girlfriend says he is stinky.  Also, in the heat, he gets really tired when he plays soccer.

    Secondly, the air is fresher when it is cold and overcast, and Luis likes it when the air is fresh.  For example, Luis can walk faster when the air is fresh.  This is because he will not sweat as much.  Also, when the air is fresh, it brings Luis a sensation of liberty and lightness.

    In conclusion, Luis likes the weather when it is cool and not too sunny for two important reasons.  First, he will not be as sweaty and stinky.  Second, he will have a sense of liberty and lightness while breathing the fresh air.

(Essay Practice with Advanced 4, 5:45)

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